Ragtime Slim Lambert version 2 corrected

Ragtime Slim Lambert version 2 corrected

The instructions are in the document Culture 3 VT 2021 at “Part 2, Individual Assignment: ………”. Attached is a version of the essay that received a very poor rating. I think you should start from scratch but it could be an indication of expectations: the document called “Ragtime Slim Lambert version 2 corrected”. Expectations are detailed in the document “Academic writing culture, Intext citation and MLA styleguide”. A great deal of importance will be accorded to the following: Start with a thesis statement i.e. something you want to argue for and that is not so obvious i.e. one could not agreed with it; Have transitions between arguments and thus paragraphs; There are transitions between paragraphs and arguments. Be hyper vigilant that everything has a reference connected to it (even what could the most obvious common sense claim to be supported by a clear hyper reference); As for the introduction, please use the Funnel technique.